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Dustlands

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The wet season comes to the Dustlands, the shredding rains announcing the harvest season for the goldgrain.



Meant as a showcase for the new atmo but didn't really succeed in that.

More images soon now I have fixed Vue.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is my first time writing a critique, so I'll try my best!

I'm not much of an environment guy, but I'll do what I can.

On my first glance, it was gorgeous and stunning. I really dig the lighting and the overall layout.

The only things I can think of at present is the lower right hand corner; I'm not sure if more variety in the grass is necessary, but I think it would be beneficial. I really like the yellow grasses going on on the other side of the well, I feel bringing those colors into the other grass patch would be awesome. No big deal though. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

I think also the well may be able to be pushed a bit farther. Looks good so far, but I think it'd be really cool to have pieces and chunks broken off, to help change the silhouette. Or something cool to push that particular region. But this might not even be necessary, given our distance from the model. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

I hope these ideas were in some way useful. And again, I'm not sure these ideas are the best, so there's that too. XD

I really love it, as well as all your art! Can't wait to see more!